Looking for help with landing page design and copy

Hello, please see here: https://www.ukbusinessforums.co.uk/...s-content-on-a-streetmap.419749/#post-3159344 for lots more info, I was moved there for a site review, when I'm looking for copywrite/sales copy support, and simple landing page design for multivariant testing.

I am offering a free website (link below) for anyone in the world to pin a free map pin at street level linking to to any content. Pins show for 24 hours then expire. You can extend for 10p/day (early-bird rate, rising to £1 per day in future) up to 30 days.

Any link to an event, any link to an offer, any local community group info or announcement, any link to local themed content on social media (TikTok walks on the hills, Youtube tour of local museum etc).

This is not to compete with Eventbrite/FaceBook/Google - it is to compliment it. For free. Get more people to your Eventbrite listing through a free local pin... is the idea. And all 2-for 1 offers... and all Football Bugs clubs.. and all cool moves at the skatepark linked to TikTok :)

75% of all profit for this company is pledged to charity. Until at least Jan 2023 that will be 50% to BBC Children in Need, 50% to St Richard's Hospice, Worcester.

Yes it is empty right now, it's day 4!! Yes it looks messy at the moment, it won't when there are 1000s of pins all clustered and you zoom in to find out what events, offers, content and clubs are happening immediately around you this week ;-)

It's a bit like having your own free BatSignal light over your business/venue/location.. just much better.... :)

How sould you explain it iall n a few sentences. It is so easy, it takes minutes, its free, its charitable.... what imagery?

Thanks

Al
https://www.linkedin.com/in/alshortland/
 
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