IS this landing Page any good ??

[djdavejones]

Hi all,

Recently I asked forum members to take a look at a landing page I was deisgning for a PC campaign, and make comments about whether it was any good or not.

Based on the comments made, I’ve now made revisions (like taking off the CAPTCHA and required fields). Any comments on the new landing page would be greatly appreciated.


OLD landing page --- NEW landing page


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Cheers

 

[DuaneJackson]

What are the PPC phrases you're targeting?

 

[ignitesystems]

Hiya, the page is formatted well but you have no validation ?

 

[directmarketingadvice]

I still think youre asking for a response before you even make an offer. And, for that reason, I think the idea behind the landing page is fundamentally flawed.

Also, your price promise is weak. It's not really clear what you're promising.

Steve

 

[Birmingham]

BG image doesn't seem to work...

might also be worth adding <label> tags to the radio buttons

 

[Digger1]

The image in the new landing page isn't loading. Also, by looking at the old landing page your call to action is mixed. On the left you say "send us your artwork and content". On the right you request contact details. The message is not clear.

 

[DuaneJackson]

I don't get how anyone can comment if it's any good or not without knowing what the PPC advert that led the person there said. It could have been "Second hand washing mchines" for all we know.

 

[djdavejones]

Hi all,

The actual landing pages have now gone through many versions and the final version seems to be doing quite well. I'm considering releasing a new version new week which i may ask people to comment on again.

Anyway, many thanks for your input

Dave
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