Some constructive website feedback

Discussion in 'Website Reviews & Testing' started by Damir87, Jan 29, 2020.

  1. Damir87

    Damir87 UKBF Newcomer Full Member

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    Hi guys,

    Can you give me some of your constructive feedback for our start-up's website?

    Here is the link: thecrofitgroup(dot)com

    Thank you,
     
    Posted: Jan 29, 2020 By: Damir87 Member since: Jan 27, 2020
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  2. intheTRADE

    intheTRADE UKBF Regular Free Member

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    Viewing on desktop:

    Personally I really like it. Very clean, clear and direct. Good call to actions. Nice touch with 'Meet Our Trainers'

    The only thing I think you need to add really is a testimonials/what our clients say page. A business like this really does rely on reputation. I don't see any success stories or cases studies on the site which, as a potential client, I would be looking for first
     
    Posted: Jan 29, 2020 By: intheTRADE Member since: Apr 14, 2019
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  3. Damir87

    Damir87 UKBF Newcomer Full Member

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    Posted: Jan 29, 2020 By: Damir87 Member since: Jan 27, 2020
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  4. simon field

    simon field UKBF Big Shot Full Member - Verified Business

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    I can't see a telephone number anywhere.
     
    Posted: Jan 29, 2020 By: simon field Member since: Feb 4, 2011
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  5. fisicx

    fisicx It's Major Clanger! Staff Member

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    Huge cookie thing that only has an accept option - and I don't accept. I then got a popup with a sign up form - really annoying as I don't even know what you are offering yet.

    Why the map on your contact page? Are you expecting me to visit?

    Why not put your contact details in the header/footer of every page.

    'Croft Group' suggests a corporation - but it's just the two of you.

    On the trainer page you have cartoons - I have to guess what they mean.

    The booking calendar is too tall for the page. I have to scroll to see the full month and other selectors. And you only do skype. Which means you have rejected everyone who doesn't use skype.

    Make the background white, the hospital green isn't good.

    Tried the how it works page and it's just a bunch of videos. Great for some but I prefer to read - and I'm your target customer (60, unfit and diabetic).
     
    Posted: Jan 29, 2020 By: fisicx Member since: Sep 12, 2006
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  6. DontAsk

    DontAsk UKBF Ace Free Member

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    You made the same mistake as me, but if you use 'croft' in the URL you get a completely different website. I would have chosen a different name.
     
    Posted: Jan 29, 2020 By: DontAsk Member since: Jan 7, 2015
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  7. fisicx

    fisicx It's Major Clanger! Staff Member

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    I realised that later.

    Even Google asks: 'did you mean Croft Group?'
     
    Posted: Jan 29, 2020 By: fisicx Member since: Sep 12, 2006
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  8. NickGrogan

    NickGrogan UKBF Ace Full Member

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    load the page, move the mouse to click on the accept cookies button and get two popups. No thanks

    https://thecrofitgroup.com/how-it-works

    Dont auto play videos, its annoying.

    Everything is explained by video, why, I'm sat in an office, I dont want everyone listening to this and it takes much longer.

    https://thecrofitgroup.com/pricing

    weekly prices are wrong, or monthly prices are wrong.

    https://thecrofitgroup.com/trainers

    Only two? What happened to Clint from the front page?

    https://thecrofitgroup.com/free-plan

    Another video, except this one doesn't play.

    None of the free tools exist.
     
    Posted: Jan 29, 2020 By: NickGrogan Member since: Nov 15, 2012
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  9. Mark T Jones

    Mark T Jones UKBF Big Shot Free Member

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    WIP?

    Agree re the hospital green - it doesn't inspire

    'What makes us unique' isn't unique in any way.

    Crofit Group Corporation? Really? Are you trying to be friendly & personal or aspiring to world domination? Personally, from a personal trainer I'd favour the former. (I fear you'll be labelling yourself 'entrepreneur' next).

    That said, I can see the bones of a good idea here; just narrow down your target market and talk to them rather than trying to please everyone.
     
    Posted: Jan 30, 2020 By: Mark T Jones Member since: Nov 4, 2015
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  10. SYN

    SYN UKBF Contributor Full Member

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    The site itself doesn't look bad at all and looks fine on mobile devices as well but as others mentioned the name might be an issue, seems to be used by a new build developer already.
     
    Posted: Feb 4, 2020 By: SYN Member since: Jan 21, 2019
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