Rate my title tag

[PlecPicker]

[Pick guitar picks by PlecPicker - Quality strings & plectrums"]

I was wondering if anyone on here would like to give their opinions on my music shop's title tag

(This is what appears as a blue link on Google searches).

I welcome others to do the same.

Post:
1)what you like
2)what you don't like
3)your title tag for others to comment on


Hopefully this post could prove useful for new businesses.

 

[PlecPicker]

I will remove this thread if it's considered spammy by any moderators.

 

[CherylDavis]

Doesn't sound like a music shop. More like a guitar accessories shop.

 

[PlecPicker]

I suppose it will be just a humble little guitar accessories shop to start with before it can become more.

Just out of curiously how much do people pay web designers for making a site? I wonder web designers are the scribes of the 21st century.

 

[Working First Aid]

It doesn't flow a lot when read, which could be a problem.

Then again I am tired after nights, so even Roger Red Hat might cause me problems today

 

[PlecPicker]

I've been wondering that.
I personally like "Pick Plec Picker - Guitar accessories made quicker"

It is worth separating PlecPicker in to two words?

My business partner wants it as one word but i completely disagree with him on this from a SEO perspective.

 

[altwebdesign]

Use some of your keywords in the title tag - what about local keywords if you arent selling online and targetting only a local market?

Maybe this will help: http://www.seomoz.org/blog/are-your-titles-irresistibly-click-worthy-viral

I hope you create something brilliant - Also dont forget your description tag! Thats also shown in search engine results.

 

[fisicx]

I've been wondering that.
I personally like "Pick Plec Picker - Guitar accessories made quicker"

Pants.

Great for the name of the site but it's a rubbish page title.

You need to start with something like;

Guitar accessories and spares - {location}

As to the cost of a website: anything from free to £100K. Just the same as a Guitar.

 

[Working First Aid]

Aye, you've got such a small amount of time to grab visitors and (personally) anything that makes my mind stumble puts me off.

Give it the Ronseal touch.