Get Dotted !!! ( am new check my business out )

Hey there my name is ayodeji akande and ive setup quite a successful business selling digital dotted portraits.
have a look and tell me what you think.

cheers
pandapapercreations.co.uk
 

florenceij

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Jul 29, 2006
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Hi Deji,

Welcome to the forum

Nice site, I havent come across a service like this. There are some few typos on the about us and process page try reading through it carefully and I am sure you will pick them out.

For instance in your about us on line see the highlighted words in bold

Hi guys, so you want to no a little about the company, well here's how we got started. About a year ago i was jus messing around on the computer creating digital portraits of myself, and i came up with what you see on the home page, i ended up placing the image on my face book page. Where i got lots of feedback saying its a really cool design and people basically asking me to create one for them. An i was spending so much time creating them a friend of mine suggested i place a price on them, which i did and started selling them as prints, at the time this was just word of mouth sales. coming to the end of 2008 i sold 300 prints on just word of mouth because people seen them great for family members, prestents etc and it came to me that i need to take the next step, which is where we are know, with my very own website which i have been running since jan 09, since then up to march the 17 iv'e sold even more 400 prints to be precise.
hope this helps you to your decision to purchase, if not check out the testimonials

I did a quick glance so there might be some I missed out. I think I would have reworded the details on your about us page differently but thats me.

Do you offer samples? :)

Regards
Ij
 
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I just read your feedback and i never really thought of that, and its a great idea and am going to start work on that A,S,A,P thank you yet again for feedback :). if anybody has anymore ideas to improve my website i look forward hearing from you!

cheers :)
 
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