OK, not the worst.
Dear NAMED CONTACT (find out who the manager of ABC company is)
(My name is XYZ, and I'm reaching out because we are a temporary staffing company for the healthcare sector in the UK. - DELETE No one wants to know your name and of course its UK, we're in the UK)
We provide temporary staff to healthcare providers like you
(Our company name is RRRRR and registration no 11111. We are capable of supplying agency staff to Care homes, NHS, Supported living e.t.c. DELETE, you said that already)
We have a large database of qualified and experienced Healthcare Assistants/Support Workers, and Senior Healthcare Assistants. (Good)
(All our staff have atleast 6 months UK care experience within the last one year, and we do an additional in-house care training for them before we start allocating them shifts. Wordy and confusing, plus if I want someone tonight, when are you going to train them?)
All our candidates have at least 6 months UK experience, and we provide them with additional in house training on a regular basis
(Our company would like to be part of your agency suppliers. Delete, what does this mean?)
(Please visit our website for more info at
www.errrrr.co.uk. Nope, you've got their attention now, don't send them elsewhere)
(I have also attached our client leaflets. Nope, not needed)
I look forward to hearing from you
Many thanks
XYZ
(Client Relationship Manager) Director
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Which actually leaves you with
Dear NAMED CONTACT
We provide temporary staff to healthcare providers like you.
We have a large database of qualified and experienced Healthcare Assistants/Support Workers, and Senior Healthcare Assistants.
All our candidates have at least 6 months' UK experience, and we regularly provide them with additional in-house training.
Do you have any roles that you're having trouble filling at the moment?
I look forward to hearing from you
Many thanks
XYZ
Director
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