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So OK. It's a New Year. Obama will make his inaugural speech today which will generate a lot of goodwill in the world. Lets give the OP the benefit of the doubt then and sum up where he went wrong. Several of you have already done that in your own way. I have summed it up in 4 lines and given an example of how he should have presented his case. It is by no means definitive and just something I knocked out in a few min's. The difference is there to be seen however.
Terrible overall presentation.
No definition of figures
Inconsistent financial needs
The reference to ill health when he is a key player. The following perhaps is a more professional presenation.
BUSINESS OPORTUNITY
I currently run a business refurbishing catering units where I have a found a ready market on E-bay with net pre-tax profits of £65,000 pa over the last 4 years. Quite a respectable income from a 1 man business and I have used the money to establish myself on a sound personal financial footing and was quite happy with the status quo for a while. I do now feel however there is now scope for expansion and that with a modest cash injection of around £10K I could double existing profits with very little extra in operating costs.
The business itself for example already operates from 2,000 sq ft of secured workshops with a fixed and modest rent and I would only need I young apprentice whose wages would be mostly covered by government subsidy to increase productivity.
Worth a punt then at £10K with the money secured on stock and at a time when (1) The recession and redundancy means that more people than ever will be looking for an income which is easy to move into and mobile catering easily fits that bill. (2) £10K in a bank at less that 2% is hardly a return on capital. I am offering 20% of the company
thats 20000 sqf of space apart from that yes point taken
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