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    Improve my Sales Pitch

    sure, Special deal for you £4000 for 4 hours ahah
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    Improve my Sales Pitch

    Oh no, we don;t do that many weddings. Majority of our clients are corporate, Arabs and HNI. Weddings is small % of our turnover but I want to increase it as there is a big demand for it Thanks, most of the SEO work was done by companies in Czech Republic. As a professional courtesy may I...
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    Improve my Sales Pitch

    example of our request form as you can we ask for contact number but now I will ask the developer to code time as well. Most of our leads is generated from Google, Instagram, Linkedin Ads Small minority of our customers come from Magazine advertising. I also have bill boards in influential...
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    Barber shop - staffing issues

    Tell him to register for Booksy. My barber said he was very busy but now it is starting to go quiet.
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    Improve my Sales Pitch

    Thank you for your input & I like the ending much better than mine. These posts have opened my eyes that if I want to push the company forward we need to bring serious changes in terms of our communication with clients. You're completely right, however I can't post testimonials on my website...
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    £5,000 Startup Loan

    You won the lottery mate. Bounceback loan 2.5% 1st zero repayment No personal guarantee
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    Improve my Sales Pitch

    Can you recommend a firm that can help me? You have been very helpful Any recommendations for a firm? I don't know why people keep saying that? why would I do that.. I'm trying to improve my business. What should i search on Google? I keep getting SEO copywriters as a result but I don't...
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    Improve my Sales Pitch

    I was using that as up-selling technique but as per to your suggestion I have removed it.
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    Improve my Sales Pitch

    Thank you for all your replies, I have taken it all onboard. This is the new template we have created. Thank you for your email, First here at ******* we want to congratulate you on setting your wedding date. We know how important the day is and it would be our pleasure to make sure you arrive...
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    Why don't people just pay or don't use non-essential service

    I'm, however I need allow 30 days notice period don't I? Yes we do guaranteed but we can also not guaranteed if the village is being held in a cottage estate or farmland and there mud if the cars arrives dirty to the venue.
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    Why don't people just pay or don't use non-essential service

    In the early days, I use to do lot hard-selling with Money back guarantee but what I noticed was the customer would complain about every little details they could find in order to get some of their money back but I think medium selling approach is the best. For Hotels that use us we offer them...
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    Improve my Sales Pitch

    Thank you for the feedback, I will re-write a new one. Thank you for your reply - Would suggest to emailing the client asking to schedule a call a better solution? Thank you for your reply - I will draft up a new template. The reason we include 8 hours because if we give out the vehicle for...
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    Best software for emails

    We use, G-suite from Google. No complaints. In the past, I used Mozilla Thunderbird which is free and very good.
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    Improve my Sales Pitch

    Hi, My name is **** am enquiring in regards to the Luxury wedding package costs for options 1 & 2. Please can somebody respond back to me with a price list of the packages you offer. My partner and myself have a wedding date of the **of **** 2020 in mind. Kind regards Above example just came as...
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    Why don't people just pay or don't use non-essential service

    If I don't believe my business is a Luxury Service then how will my customers? I will make new thread asking for improvements as currently I have tunnel vision and think nothing is wrong with that Thank you for being honest opinion, clearly it looks there is something wrong with the sales...
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