Hi, I have some experience in this and might be able to help.
There is two separate issues here;
1. The letter and leaflet
2. The target area
1. The letter and leaflet.
The problem here is a very frequent and costly one. The Copywriter.
I am a marketer. Do you ask for my advice on cashflow? No. A Copywriter is not trained to care about he content, just the layout of the content. They don't get measured or paid based on the effectiveness of the advert (you haven't mentioned that this is a possibility in your post. This is very courteous of you but costly).
Excuse my bluntness. It is necessary though.
If you want your marketing to be effective, be it a letter or an advert in the newspaper, the content must be relevant and compelling.
Do you know if a free appointment is of value to your potential customers? Is a week on Saturday a good day for them or for you?
You have to look at the content of the letter as if you were the customer, not the business owner or the copywriter. Each one of you are different, but the only one who is relevant is the customer. Your wants or needs won't get any sales. Nor will a Copywriters.
2. The target area
What was the basis for choosing the area you had the letters delivered?
Is it an area with a lot of your potential customers in? Just because your business covers an area doesn't mean there re many customers in that area.
You pick an area to focus on based on it having a high concentration of potential customers in otherwise you get a very poor response.
So, poor content and poor selection of area - was it one or both f these that caused the poor result. Well, 250 is a low volume and 1000 would be much better but extrapolating from results so far, this your ROI doesn't look good.
The solution - the 3 steps of effective marketing
There are 3 steps in the process of getting more customers. I have sold many things in to many industries; on the phone, face to face and using the internet, and it is a process just like making a cake.
Step 1 is to define what each of your segments 'look like' - what the demographics of them are.
Understanding that you have multiple 'target markets' is key.
It may be that you can split your target markets, or segments, by using age or income level or geographic factors. Age, Race, Education, Income, Ethnicity, Geographic location are all factors you can use - you know which ones are relevant and which aren't, so use your knowledge and create at least 3 separate segments. You may have already done this, but it is good to review frequently.
Step 2 is about understanding 'Where' your target market is.
'Where' - physically or electronically - your target markets go when they want to research, look at, try and buy your products.
How do you get this information? Ask them.
A simple questionnaire will cover everything you need to know for his step and the next.
With the knowledge that they give you, you will be able to choose which type of advert, which venue or event and which method of marketing (telemarketing, direct mail, Google ads, leaflet drops) is most applicable and relevant to your target markets.
Right, so now you know Who your target markets are, and you know Where to put them, physically and electronically, so your adverts are effective.
Step 3 is the final part - the Content.
This can be the wording of an advert, the 'Elevator Pitch' you say when you first meet a potential customer or your website content - whatever the medium for selling.
By asking, in the questionnaire, what is important when it comes to buying your products, what they feel once they have bought your product or service (as emotions are the strongest motivator is any sale) and what they perceive the benefits are, you will then be able to use these answers as the content.
This means you have very relevant and compelling reasons why someone would want to buy your product.
Put these three steps together and you know Who and Where your target markets are and What to say to motivate them to buy from you. This includes increasing traffic to your website or to a show.
Unsurprisingly, this takes a little work to do, but just follow the steps and you can have your cake and eat it.
I don't take on clients, but I am happy to help so email me if you want further help with specifics of the questionnaire etc martinATtheseatDOTcoDOTuk (I can't put email addresses or links into posts just yet)
Hope this helps
By Martin Leib