Recent content by darkjustice

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    Anyone here invested in a startup before?

    Fully agree with you. However, I looked like an idiot rather than owing someone thousands. Also learnt valuable information and used the link you sent me. There's so much misinformation out there, that it's difficult to know what people want or what the right way is. Before you say it, my was...
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    Investment pitch assistance

    Thank you everyone for taking the time to reply. The feedback is appreciated and welcomed.
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    Investment pitch assistance

    A valid point and a mindset I'll adopt, thank you.
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    Investment pitch assistance

    Thank you Clinton. Feedback is feedback; it's no secret that I'm learning but if I can't accept criticism, I don't deserve the opportunity I have. I'll digest the information given and will use it to re-evaluate. I appreciate you taking the time to reply to me.
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    Investment pitch assistance

    Having the investment for broadening our athlete reach helps diversify the stock. The quicker we diversify into different teams and sports, the more customers we appeal to. We can do this organically, but it would take longer than I'd like. I'd also use the money for targeted marketing as the...
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    Investment pitch assistance

    Not at all. This is largely my fault as this is an overview, where the information is in the pitch deck. I haven't articulated this particularly well, but this is what this thread is for. Sooner look silly here and not in the "real world". Would you mind if I messaged you privately with the...
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    Investment pitch assistance

    Tough break! Thanks for highlighting the flaws. 15% ROI plus their funds back after the first year, on top of yearly dividends as they'd also own 15% of the company. The 250k is essentially treated as a loan rather than a valuation. The dividends on top will obviously be whatever the profit...
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    Investment pitch assistance

    I'd be interested to see why you feel this? Feedback always welcome.
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    Investment pitch assistance

    **PLEASE NOTE THAT I HAVE A PITCH DECK TO ACCOMPANY THIS EMAIL BUT I COULD NOT ATTACH IT. IF YOU WISH TO SEE IT, PLEASE DROP ME A DM** Good evening everyone, I'm looking for assistance with my current proposal for investment. I want to ensure that the information below isn't confusing and...