Local newspaper lineage ads

Discussion in 'Sales, Marketing & PR' started by General_Johnson, Apr 12, 2010.

  1. General_Johnson

    General_Johnson UKBF Newcomer Free Member

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    What is your opinion on the lineage ad I have created below. Be as awful or nice as you like :) I need real opinions.

    WE SAY YES TO DSS
    Quality, affordable
    properties across
    Calderdale for DSS
    applicants. Visit
    www.dssyes.com
    today and make
    your next move
    your last move

    Obviously it will be aligned correctly in the paper. I welcome creative alternatives.

    Thanks

    The General :D
    Posted: Apr 12, 2010 By: General_Johnson Member since: Apr 3, 2010
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  2. dpoole07

    dpoole07 UKBF Newcomer Free Member

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    Hi there 'General'!?

    Really like the content of your lineage ad. Adverts should always lead with the key selling point (as you do...DSS etc), have a call to action (as you do) and, if possible have a memorable phrase (as you do!)

    Only suggestions I would have would be potentially adding a contact tel?...some people may prefer an initial enquiry to a real person. Also potentially you could create a sense of urgency? Such as...limited properties available, contact now!

    I work in advertising for one of the countries leading broadsheet newspapers so see many of these ads and the above points seem to be coherent with the successful ads.

    Hope that helps.

    Daniel Poole
    Posted: Apr 13, 2010 By: dpoole07 Member since: Apr 12, 2010
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  3. Lee Jones Jnr

    Lee Jones Jnr UKBF Newcomer Free Member

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    That'll do just fine.
    Clear, concise and to the point.
    Posted: Apr 13, 2010 By: Lee Jones Jnr Member since: Dec 6, 2009
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  4. General_Johnson

    General_Johnson UKBF Newcomer Free Member

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    Thanks guys for the info. This hopefully will be running this Friday in the local paper. I'll see how it goes and repost. :D
    Posted: Apr 14, 2010 By: General_Johnson Member since: Apr 3, 2010
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