HAve i gone to mad?

Zenicman

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• May 14, 2007

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WHat do you think of these?

WHich one is the best and which one would you go for.

Obv i will change the others just before anyone says it

http://idea1.kevybaby.net/Index.html

http://idea2.kevybaby.net/Index.html

http://idea3.kevybaby.net/Index.html

http://idea4.kevybaby.net/Index.html

 

Gillie

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• May 14, 2007

• #2

Like no 1 but anyway you can fit it all on one page without the scrolling??

 

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Eagle

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• May 14, 2007

• #3

Just say no to right-scrolling - it's an instant 'browser close' for me.

 

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CarolineICE

• May 14, 2007

• #4

I like number 1 too.

You will spell check it though won't you?! Please?!


Good luck,

Caroline

 

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Zenicman

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• May 14, 2007

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Of course justr a design page

Eagle will you pm me with details as to what you mena please

 

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Gillie

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• May 14, 2007

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He means that you need to fit it all width wise on one page not use the scroll button!

 

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Zenicman

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• May 14, 2007

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OO

Yeh it will all come toghter soon i hope

 

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Zenicman

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• May 15, 2007

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any other views?

 

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fxdigital

• May 15, 2007

• #9

Number one is your best choice in my opinion however I would also include a picture of some children playing… smiling and having lots of fun… frame this within the site… maybe using a cut out… and then justify the text… and remove the scroll and you might have something a little better.

Of course this is just my opinion… and as you know we all like different things.

Steve Cartwright
FX Digital Pty Ltd
website-designs.com

 

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Zenicman

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• May 15, 2007

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The only problem with having children playing is laws agaisnt this maybe
I stock wll have one

 

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maunder

• May 16, 2007

• #11

You need to get the width sorted, I would not read it myself Like that.

Paul

 

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Zenicman

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• May 16, 2007

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I have done the home page and i have tried to make it so i dont have tomove the width or hight but it didnt work

 

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Hayles

• May 16, 2007

• #13

Kev - you should be looking to appear professional at all stages. Posting this (with the terrible and numerous spelling mistakes) gives everyone the wrong impression. I would really advise you sort the text and then post back. The odd mistake doesn't matter til it's final, but this is littered with them. Hope you take it constructively

H

 

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Zenicman

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• May 16, 2007

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OF course hayles as always all comments are open handly welcome

 

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chrisphoto

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• May 17, 2007

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Buy a bigger monitor, looks fine on mine!

Have you tried building the page inside a 100% or even 800pixel table?

 

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DanMartin

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• May 17, 2007

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I agree that number one is the best and that the right scrolling needs to be sorted out. It also definately needs more images to break up the text and maybe some "client" testimonials?

Dan Martin
www.businesszone.co.uk

 

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Dan Matthews

• May 17, 2007

• #17

Am presuming you have updated these now - or am I going mad?

 

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Zenicman

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• May 17, 2007

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Still not updated have scapred the idea am going for

Plain white background
with 4 main colours

Thats all im saying

 

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