Can you check my landing page

Aug 26, 2005
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Hey all

I have just started to produce landing pages. I do not have any auto responder software at the moment so I am not doing that. I am just testing response on posting articles with loads of great information.

Please take a look at The truth about yoyo diets

Let me know what you think.

Thanks

Matt
 
Ok let me re-phrase what i said, or put it in context really.

What is the purpose of this page? What are people meant to do when they get there?

What do you expect to happen?

This is a genuine set of questions here, as it will help decide how the page is performing.
 
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Hry all

Thanks for the feedback.

With this page I am targetting people who are researching diets, especially fad style diets. What I want to do is educate people in why fad diets don't work long term.

I am thinking of removing all references to hypnosis and instead put on a name and email capture form for a free ebook on weight loss methods. Once people sign up they will be taken to another page where they can download the PDF and then from there I can email them with information about hypnosis for weight loss.

What do people think?

Matt
 
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