need the help for dissertation grammar

[ccmoon]

Hello, I am a Chinese student. My friend and I are writing master dissertation now, we suppose to be finished next week. We hope that someone can help us to revise grammar. If your mother language is English and you have business background (it is better your degree is marketing or e-commerce), and you would like to spend at least 10 hours on two pieces of dissertation (one 10,000 words dissertation needs 5 hours or more), please let us know. We hope you can modify in English perspective strictly. We pay!!!!

We live near London, it is better if you live in surrounding area. We would like to listen to your kindly advice face to face. We can pay the deposit first by cash.
If you want to help two Chinese girls, or you are interesting in Chinese culture, please send me email: ccpoohfish*hotmail.com. We will give you Chinese traditional gift for the first meeting. : p

Thank you for your attention. We are looking forward hearing from you.
Cody

[Cornish Steve]

All the best with your dissertation, and I hope you have enjoyed your time of study in London. I've had the pleasure of visiting China and am impressed with the effort your country makes speaking English. I hope, over time, we realise the importance of learning Chinese.

I hope you are able to find someone willing to read through your document and suggest changes in grammar. Maybe someone will have the time needed to help you out, especially since you made clear you are willing to pay.