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BKE Business Services Ltd
8th August 2005, 20:29
Hi I was wondering if anyone would mind taking a look at our newest portfolio piece and well giving it a critical eye. I just want to see if there are any glitches that may come up and if teh standards compliance is as thorough as it should be.

Thanx all!

www.townguidebooks.co.uk

epiphany
8th August 2005, 21:51
http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.townguidebooks.co.uk%2F

A few that are very simple to fix

Jayne
8th August 2005, 21:58
Hi,

I liked your site, very easy to use for a novice like me. I go on a lot of sites on the net, most put that much info' on you get bored and click off. Really easy to read, I liked it.

Best Wishes

Jayne

Cornish Steve
9th August 2005, 00:38
I agree with others who responded to your message: Your site is well done. I particularly enjoyed the pictures (now I sound like my younger daughter!).

Each page contains two or three grammatical errors, mostly related to punctuation. For example, "your first hours' consultation is free" should be "your first hour's consultation is free". The problems will be easy to fix.

Rob Holmes
9th August 2005, 04:44
Nice simple navigation and easy on the eye !

Rob

webit
9th August 2005, 06:02
I like the site very much. I'd change the email link to a form though (a pet grip of mine)

Alpha
9th August 2005, 09:03
Sorry Steve but I will have to disagree with your literacy.

First hours consultation should not have an apostrophe before the s. The apostrophe is meant to take the place of missing letters and there isn't any missing between the r and s. :D

Amber
9th August 2005, 09:12
Sorry, Alpha, but apostrophes aren't just used in contractions :)

They're also used in possessives. In this case it is the consultation belonging to the first hour which is referred to, therefore an apostrophe is required.

Alpha
9th August 2005, 09:17
Amber what has having babies got to do with it :D


I stand well and truly corrected :oops:

Better get on an adult literacy course (its been years since I was at school :) )

Alpha
9th August 2005, 09:22
Of course I could just simply delete those posts to avoid embarrassment

:twisted:

But of course then I would be accused of censorship and start another drawn out debate. :)

Amber
9th August 2005, 09:28
lol at "contractions"!

And if you delete posts, then I'll look like I'm talking to myself again :)

Alpha
9th August 2005, 09:54
Not if I deleted yours as well :wink:

What time is my next lesson?

bitsnstuff
9th August 2005, 11:08
I liked the site very much. It is easy to look at and very clear.

Well done.

Kate.

BKE Business Services Ltd
9th August 2005, 11:14
Thanks everyone for the input. We have now validated the site at w3 and everything is perfect! Great...

Louise