How do I reach potential Network Marketing Leaders?

[ukmonavie]

Hi guys,

I was wondering if anyone can offer some advice.

What I am trying to do is market my opportunity to existing network marketing leaders with a prelaunch ground floor opportunity, but as I have no idea where to look I was wondering if any of you can offer some assistance in pointing me in the right direction.

Any help appreciated.

Ian

[daveashton]

Any clues as to what you are trying to sell?

[ukmonavie]

I didn't want the post to sound like a sales pitch that's why I didn't put any details up.

It's www.ukmonavie.com if you know someone that might be interested. It's in prelaunch in the UK so I need to get to as many people as possible.

[daveashton]

Ok I think it is a herbal get well drink with a big price tag and no testimonials?

In Scotland they have a great fix for most problems and at that price it would get you a good version of it.

As for the name.....

Whisky

Sorry I am being flipant but the website does not sell and I got bored just reading the home page sorry.

I think the first thin you need to do is cut about 90% of your words. Get straight to the point and pretended you have just been to an Australian University and studied marketing.

i.e. if you sell big steak sausages call your company big steak sausages Ltd.

Next

Give the "how" in your opportunity page. Great management team, great product , even great margins is not enough. You need to explain quickly and concisely how we do that and make it simple and provide proof that method works.

Oh and there is some real talent on here to help you with the website do's and don’ts so why not ask people to review the site?

[MinuWeb]

Hi,

I have to agree with Dave, I filcked through your site for a few minutes and didn't see anything that let me know exactly what it is meant to do for me, certainly not enough to justify me sending any $'s to anyone.

Go for a more direct sales approach, when people visit a site they want to know in a few seconds what that site sells, what it does and how much it is.

[webit]

Go for a more direct sales approach, when people visit a site they want to know in a few seconds what that site sells, what it does and how much it is.

I agree with both the last two postings - I'm not going to spend time working out what your product is.

I'd totally restructure the site - the first page should be used to draw people in (whilst informing them what the product is)

Also, I wouldn't want to see view counters on any page of a business site.

Your font changes half way through the second paragraph on Firefox for no reason and I wouldn't start your pitch with 'Humanity has been waiting for MonaVie.'

I'm unsure of the structure of the company - are you a reseller - hows the URL working? If you have input to the product I'd say the price is emm rather steep and the pay plan wont work for a UK market.

THE PAY PLAN

'The MonaVie Pay Plan, hailed by networking professionals around the world as the most innovative and lucrative plan ever devised, allows for multiple ways to earn weekly income. The Plan combines the power of a New Generation Binary and its unlimited depth feature, with the wealth-creating feature of unlimited width. And if that’s not enough, MonaVie is proud to introduce a 7 Generation 20% Check Match with Dynamic Compression. Never before has a plan been developed that so richly rewards Distributors for building both depth and width!'

I'm really trying not to be down on this but I think it needs work, at least you're in the right place for advice. Good luck.

[MinuWeb]

THE PAY PLAN

'The MonaVie Pay Plan, hailed by networking professionals around the world as the most innovative and lucrative plan ever devised, allows for multiple ways to earn weekly income. The Plan combines the power of a New Generation Binary and its unlimited depth feature, with the wealth-creating feature of unlimited width. And if that’s not enough, MonaVie is proud to introduce a 7 Generation 20% Check Match with Dynamic Compression. Never before has a plan been developed that so richly rewards Distributors for building both depth and width!'



This is the new way to describe pyramid / MLM sales, although of course anyone who sells using this scheme denies it is pyramid :D