D Husein of MVT Technologies saying hello.

[dhusein]

Hi to you all,

Embarking on a new and exciting international business project has provided me with the motivation to join this forum.

I am 33 based in the UK and a separated father of 3 wonderful children. I have a telecommunications background and a Degree in electronic engineering. My interests are in the future technology of the internet and the role of independent consultancy within an evolving market place. I have a sharp business eye that matches my sense of humor. Business is something I do in order that I may enjoy life.

The International Business

The final Internet Frontier is streaming multi-media communications and marketing for the masses. The opportunity is hear and anyone can profit from it.

Timing and a unique product suite have created a window of opportunity that I wish to share with you. Use the product to expand a primary business and profit from the process.

We have a proven successful company with an international track record of success. I am looking for leadership potential that will facilitate growth on a global platform. There are no geographical limits to where this may take you and the income potential will leave you breathless. A true Win Win situation.

“If you could predict where the masses are going and get there first you could make your fortune”

Take action NOW!!

http://www.lifestyleinvestments.co.uk/opportunity.htm

I am looking forward to speaking with you.

0044 (0) 1189 761518 (Reading UK)

[Rob Holmes]

Hi dhusein,

Welcome to the forums. I hope you find them useful!

I'm not entirely sure what your product is because when I clicked on the links the presentation didn't appear. Maybe because I use Firefox?

Rob

[Desmond Brambley]

I use Opera, the site loaded, but when I pressed play, it didn't do anything.

Good luck with your venture though.

[top-click]

Same issue with Firefox - but Explorer worked fine, it's an interesting proposition,

Good lucka nd welcome along

Rob

top-click.co.uk

[Rob Holmes]

<reluctantly blows dust of Internet Explorer>

ok - now I see it. I'm afraid it didn't grab me!

Rob

[Whistle Ink]

Hi welcome to the forums!

Its a great idea, but looks too expensive, I think most will wait until the likes of Hotmail add an extra button on that allows you to do it.

Also looks VERY complicated to sell. I couldnt be bothered reading it all but I think it said more profits would be dependant on how many ppl I recruit to sell and how many sales they make? Not worth the hassle!

[Cornish Steve]

Hello there!

I visited your website, and it's clear that you have put a lot of time and thought into it. To add to the comments you have received from others, let me throw in a couple of observations of my own.

1) Your audio narrative is interrupted occasionally by unfortunate background noise. Since it distracted me, I'm sure it distracted others.

2) Your writing style is rather convoluted. Take, for example, the following excerpt from your home page:

"Allow the entrepreneur within you to absorb the prospect of pioneering the final internet frontier, profit from perfectly timed high end communications software priced for the masses."

There are several grammatical mistakes here (not least of which is the fact that it's two sentences joined by a comma). The bigger problem, however, is your lack of clarity. What exactly do you mean by "absorb the prospect of pioneering"?

Unfortunately, little things can make a big difference. You must create a first impression that is memorable for the right reasons. On your home page, this means crafting a clear, concise message.

I hope you find this feedback helpful.

Steve
www.goldctr.com

[Srivvy]

Guys

Please correct me if I'm wrong, but isnt this network marketing again?