You guessed it.... another newbie :)

[ukmonavie]

Hi all. I've been working by myself for a few years and didn't even think about looking for a forum that combines people together like this.

How silly do I feel???????

Anyway, I've found you all now, and hopefully will learn how to move my business forward.

I am an independent distributor for Mona Vie who are just about to launch in the UK.

Your thoughts on how to recruit are more than welcome as this is where I don't have any expertise whatsoever.

My site is www.ukmonavie.com

Your comments are gratefully received.

Sorry moderators if I've put more in this section than I should.

[top-click]

Hi there ukmonavie!

Welcome along, your product looks interesting - and healthy too!

If you have any specific questions or queries this is the place to ask - there are lots of useful brains to pick here.

Cheers and good luck
Rob

[Ozzy]

Hi ukmonavie,
Welcome to the forum, and dont worry this section is all about introducing yourself and what you do :)

I hope you benefit from being a member here and look forward to seeing you around :)

[epiphany]

Welcome!

A couple of hints for improving your site, get rid of the plash page, it looks untidy and it reduces the chance of your site being ranked well.

Re-write the text on your site, it isn't clear what you are doing, I think you want to get people to sell the product for you but the site didn't specifically say that. To be honest it looks very much like that text is a standard blurb given out to all agents by the main suppliers :)

[odeniyi]

Welcome!

There are many more yet to discover online forums....enjoy!

[ukmonavie]

Welcome!

A couple of hints for improving your site, get rid of the plash page, it looks untidy and it reduces the chance of your site being ranked well.

Re-write the text on your site, it isn't clear what you are doing, I think you want to get people to sell the product for you but the site didn't specifically say that. To be honest it looks very much like that text is a standard blurb given out to all agents by the main suppliers :)

Thanks for the pointers. I appreciate them greatly. The entry page is there just as a doorway to the main company site, and yes it is a standard site that all distributors get. I'm not interested really in getting high placing on the search engines as, without a large input of cash, I won't get a high ranking anyway.

The page is there just so I can monitor the marketing I do myself with purchased leads and PPC.

Ian

[epiphany]

Ultimately the site can only be there to persuade people to buy from you and all I am saying it did the opposite for me simply because

a: the text didn't give me enough information
b: the text was just a standard marketing spiel, which gives the impression that the site owner didn't make much of an effort

this is just my opinion, I am not saying it for any other reason than to be helpful; I hope it comes across like that rather than me just being picky, feel free to ignore me :D

[ukmonavie]

I apprieciate you opinion. After all how can I make things better without people's opinion.

Yes it is helpful, and please let me have as much info as you want to share.

I would like to have my own site, but I have tried to design one and, well, I'm no web designer and I don't have the funds at the moment to have one designed for me.

If I took text from www.monavie.com and incorporate it into my site, do you think that would have a bigger impact?

You opinion agian please, if you have the time.

Thanks

Ian

[epiphany]

Cool, well I will give you a full opinion tomorrow morning :)

ps got your pm :D