Image man site updated

[CG Effect]

Hi guys I have updated my web site hope I have improved it. P
lease could you suggest corrections.

www.imagemann.com

thanks

[RockLinks]

Hi there,

The text is hard to read i suggest changing the text colour.

[CG Effect]

Just given my site a major overhaul today. Let me know if you think it is better.

[Rob Holmes]

Hi,

Sorry but I personally feel that it's a little under-designed for a graphic artist ?

I'd like to see a more 'blended' site with colours fading in together rather than single blocks of colour.

I really like your art by the way.

Don't take my comments personally - others may love it!

Rob

[CG Effect]

Thanks for the compliment on my work, I'm not a website designer I would expect better site from a web designer. I like constructive
criticism.

[Amber]

Well, I can't really comment on the design, but I really think your copy could do with some work. You have several typos on your front page, problems with caps/lack of caps, and the punctuation and grammar is a bit rough in places.

Sorry if that sounds harsh, but it's really worth paying attention to the writing, as it can be really off-putting to clients if a site has a lot of mistakes.

Feel free to give me a shout if you need some help with it.

[RockLinks]

If i can be of any assitance please let me know.